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Lisa
Title : Tarot Beeyotch Posts : 274 Rep Power : 5562 Points : 50 Join date : 2009-12-24 Age : 49 Location : VA
| Subject: Lisa's poems & such Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:26 am | |
| Some are good, some are bad. Meh, whatever. LOL
Untitled by me
There will be no surrender No apology I have made my declaration No regrets
There will be no changing my mind No retreat I have spoken my truth No compromise
There will be no loss of love on my part No lessening I have chosen you No other
There is no other choice Not for me Even if you choose To love me not.
The Sweetest Word by me
Caresses whisper across my skin Like a cool breeze on an autumn day.
Eyes bright as stars Delve into mine.
Kisses soft as raindrops Alight on my eyelids and cheeks.
Words are replaced By softer sounds.
Butterflies tremble within me Longing to break free and fly.
"Yes" is the sweetest word.
My Heart by me
My heart took off without me again. It walked out the door & straight to you. I sat alone & wondered why I felt wrong, Why I felt alone, Why I felt empty.
My heart walked off without me again. It jumped off the couch & ran straight to you. I started to wonder why I was here, Why I was sitting, wondering, Why I longed to hold someone new.
My heart took off without me again. It ran as fast as it could to you. But, I caught up with it by the time we knocked on your door. | |
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Lisa
Title : Tarot Beeyotch Posts : 274 Rep Power : 5562 Points : 50 Join date : 2009-12-24 Age : 49 Location : VA
| Subject: Untitled Haiku Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:27 am | |
| Hot, brown and frothy Lucious heat washes my lips Caffeine rush ensues | |
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Lisa
Title : Tarot Beeyotch Posts : 274 Rep Power : 5562 Points : 50 Join date : 2009-12-24 Age : 49 Location : VA
| Subject: Re: Lisa's poems & such Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:43 am | |
| She Sat by me
She came & sat next to me, quietly. She didn't take my hand. She didn't give me a glance. She didn't ask a question, Or utter the barest sigh.
She sat next to me, quietly. She wasn't waiting. She wasn't hoping. She wasn't expectant Of anything but my quiet company.
She came and sat next to me, quietly. She offered nothing. She took nothing. But in so doing She gave me everything that I'd Ever need.
She sat next to me, quietly. Until she was done. And then, she quietly walked away. | |
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Lisa
Title : Tarot Beeyotch Posts : 274 Rep Power : 5562 Points : 50 Join date : 2009-12-24 Age : 49 Location : VA
| Subject: Re: Lisa's poems & such Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:59 am | |
| Ugly by me
green, muck-eyed, nasty long-fingered,clawed dripping with poison sharp, pointy teeth
knife driving pain pushing fear crunching paranoid delusions
empty headed, fluff gut-wrenching harsh words, ripping mine, mine, mine! | |
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Lisa
Title : Tarot Beeyotch Posts : 274 Rep Power : 5562 Points : 50 Join date : 2009-12-24 Age : 49 Location : VA
| Subject: Re: Lisa's poems & such Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:27 pm | |
| This was inspired by Taliesyn. I wrote it when I finally understood and FELT the stories of the God & Goddess... I had only an intellectual comprehension before him, and I'm forever grateful for the awakening that he gave me to this particular mystery.
I lie fallow, waiting Wanting to feel your soft, gentle touch Waiting to be awakened, moistened Dark and fertile, I lie below you.
You come, you pour down on me I feel your light, your warmth You shine on me, opening my darkness You pour into me, filling my void.
We come together, Earth and Sky We become more than our parts More than we thought we could be, We become One and Many.
Whole. | |
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Lisa
Title : Tarot Beeyotch Posts : 274 Rep Power : 5562 Points : 50 Join date : 2009-12-24 Age : 49 Location : VA
| Subject: Re: Lisa's poems & such Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:28 pm | |
| You are the sun that shines upon me, The rain that washes over me, The breeze that caresses my bare skin, The heart that beats within me. You are my love.
You are the wave that crashes upon me, The storm that brews above me, The chill that makes me shiver, The fire that keeps me warm. You are my love.
You are the breath that fills my lungs, The gasp that takes my breath away, The thought that wakes me in the night, The shudder that takes over me. You are my love. | |
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Quixotically Yours
Title : Stuck in a State of Ennui Posts : 463 Rep Power : 5820 Points : 41 Join date : 2009-12-21 Age : 41 Location : California
| Subject: Re: Lisa's poems & such Tue Apr 13, 2010 1:12 am | |
| some of these are sad and beautiful like shakesphere, the one about your coffee was freakishly sensual. hope it's ok that i commented | |
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Lisa
Title : Tarot Beeyotch Posts : 274 Rep Power : 5562 Points : 50 Join date : 2009-12-24 Age : 49 Location : VA
| Subject: Re: Lisa's poems & such Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:02 am | |
| Of course. I always appreciate criticism. Thanks, I liked the coffee one too. | |
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Ray
Title : Mrs Nosey Posts : 500 Rep Power : 5920 Points : 47 Join date : 2009-10-04 Age : 49 Location : Vancouver BC
| Subject: Re: Lisa's poems & such Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:27 pm | |
| Wow Lisa beautiful and powerful work And honestly the first poem had me in tears because it hit home for me and with a certain person I am dealing with. And as for Criticisms I do not have any, I believe that poetry should just be left as it is, ( hope that makes sense) and as long as it makes sense to you and conveys how you feel that is all that matters Look forward to reading m ore | |
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Lisa
Title : Tarot Beeyotch Posts : 274 Rep Power : 5562 Points : 50 Join date : 2009-12-24 Age : 49 Location : VA
| Subject: Re: Lisa's poems & such Wed Apr 14, 2010 9:01 pm | |
| I go through phases. I haven't been particularly creative in a while. So, we may see more the next time I have a burst of that type of energy. Or, if I find any more that I had hiding someplace. Thanks for enjoying them. | |
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Ray
Title : Mrs Nosey Posts : 500 Rep Power : 5920 Points : 47 Join date : 2009-10-04 Age : 49 Location : Vancouver BC
| Subject: Re: Lisa's poems & such Thu Apr 15, 2010 5:55 am | |
| Oh I totally know what you mean about going through phases Right now I am in one of those I have a lot of ideas but I cannot really get them down right on paper. And as I said will be looking forward to whatever you have to offer and your more then welcome | |
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