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PostSubject: Lisa's poems & such   Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:26 am

Some are good, some are bad. Meh, whatever. LOL

Untitled
by me

There will be no surrender
No apology
I have made my declaration
No regrets

There will be no changing my mind
No retreat
I have spoken my truth
No compromise

There will be no loss of love on my part
No lessening
I have chosen you
No other

There is no other choice
Not for me
Even if you choose
To love me not.

The Sweetest Word
by me

Caresses whisper across my skin
Like a cool breeze on an autumn day.

Eyes bright as stars
Delve into mine.

Kisses soft as raindrops
Alight on my eyelids and cheeks.

Words are replaced
By softer sounds.

Butterflies tremble within me
Longing to break free and fly.

"Yes" is the sweetest word.

My Heart
by me

My heart took off without me again.
It walked out the door & straight to you.
I sat alone & wondered why I felt wrong,
Why I felt alone,
Why I felt empty.

My heart walked off without me again.
It jumped off the couch & ran straight to you.
I started to wonder why I was here,
Why I was sitting, wondering,
Why I longed to hold someone new.

My heart took off without me again.
It ran as fast as it could to you.
But, I caught up with it by the time we knocked on your door.
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PostSubject: Untitled Haiku   Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:27 am

Hot, brown and frothy
Lucious heat washes my lips
Caffeine rush ensues
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PostSubject: Re: Lisa's poems & such   Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:43 am

She Sat
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She came & sat next to me, quietly.
She didn't take my hand.
She didn't give me a glance.
She didn't ask a question,
Or utter the barest sigh.

She sat next to me, quietly.
She wasn't waiting.
She wasn't hoping.
She wasn't expectant
Of anything but my quiet company.

She came and sat next to me, quietly.
She offered nothing.
She took nothing.
But in so doing
She gave me everything that I'd
Ever need.

She sat next to me, quietly.
Until she was done.
And then, she quietly walked away.
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PostSubject: Re: Lisa's poems & such   Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:59 am

Ugly
by me

green, muck-eyed, nasty
long-fingered,clawed
dripping with poison
sharp, pointy teeth

knife driving
pain pushing
fear crunching
paranoid delusions

empty headed, fluff
gut-wrenching
harsh words, ripping
mine, mine, mine!
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PostSubject: Re: Lisa's poems & such   Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:27 pm

This was inspired by Taliesyn. I wrote it when I finally understood and FELT the stories of the God & Goddess... I had only an intellectual comprehension before him, and I'm forever grateful for the awakening that he gave me to this particular mystery.

I lie fallow, waiting
Wanting to feel your soft, gentle touch
Waiting to be awakened, moistened
Dark and fertile, I lie below you.

You come, you pour down on me
I feel your light, your warmth
You shine on me, opening my darkness
You pour into me, filling my void.

We come together, Earth and Sky
We become more than our parts
More than we thought we could be,
We become One and Many.

Whole.
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PostSubject: Re: Lisa's poems & such   Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:28 pm

You are the sun that shines upon me,
The rain that washes over me,
The breeze that caresses my bare skin,
The heart that beats within me.
You are my love.

You are the wave that crashes upon me,
The storm that brews above me,
The chill that makes me shiver,
The fire that keeps me warm.
You are my love.

You are the breath that fills my lungs,
The gasp that takes my breath away,
The thought that wakes me in the night,
The shudder that takes over me.
You are my love.
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PostSubject: Re: Lisa's poems & such   Tue Apr 13, 2010 1:12 am

some of these are sad and beautiful like shakesphere, the one about your coffee was freakishly sensual. hope it's ok that i commented
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PostSubject: Re: Lisa's poems & such   Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:02 am

Of course. I always appreciate criticism. Smile Thanks, I liked the coffee one too.
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PostSubject: Re: Lisa's poems & such   Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:27 pm

Wow Lisa beautiful and powerful work Smile And honestly the first poem had me in tears because it hit home for me and with a certain person I am dealing with.

And as for Criticisms I do not have any, I believe that poetry should just be left as it is, ( hope that makes sense) and as long as it makes sense to you and conveys how you feel that is all that matters Smile

Look forward to reading m ore Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Lisa's poems & such   Wed Apr 14, 2010 9:01 pm

I go through phases. I haven't been particularly creative in a while. Smile So, we may see more the next time I have a burst of that type of energy. Smile Or, if I find any more that I had hiding someplace.

Thanks for enjoying them. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Lisa's poems & such   Thu Apr 15, 2010 5:55 am

Oh I totally know what you mean about going through phases Smile Right now I am in one of those I have a lot of ideas but I cannot really get them down right on paper. And as I said will be looking forward to whatever you have to offer and your more then welcome Very Happy
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