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PostSubject: A poem I wrote about bipolar disorder...   Mon Nov 16, 2009 11:28 pm

This is something that is near and dear to my heart as I have battled with it, have a spouse who I believe suffers from it, and have various family members who also have it. I wrote this back in January this year during a really bad time after breaking ties with my family and fighting with my husband.

Behind my eyes lies the torture inside

the darkness and light

the wrong and right

the loser in the fight

I keep battling the fire inside

the burning for more

when what I want is less

still I search behind every door

When will the confusion subside?

Is it all a lie?

Will it end if I die?

The madness runs rampant through my mind

and it's not fair I should have to rewind

just to remember the past forgotten

When will the confusion subside?

Is it all a lie?

Will it end if I die?

Yet I live another day to try and try and try...

Mistakes I have made

sins dearly paid

absolution obtained?

The self double is forever present

while I try to become unique

it hides underneath

lurking for the moment when the gate is open

and the guard is down

What hell will reign within a girl in a white gown?

"Turn that frown upside down"

but why should I smile?

when all that awaits me

is another long mile

in the arduous journey of my tormented soul.


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no one may copy this for ANY reason
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PostSubject: Re: A poem I wrote about bipolar disorder...   Mon Nov 16, 2009 11:35 pm

nicely written! Cheers/Slainte

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PostSubject: Re: A poem I wrote about bipolar disorder...   Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:23 pm

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PostSubject: Re: A poem I wrote about bipolar disorder...   Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:50 pm

Wow powerful thanks for sharing Kat I know it is not easy to live with. *hugs*
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